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She keeps everything inside all day

Only to have it break her down at night

The secret that lies deep beneath her icy veins

Only tears her apart in the end

She's fragile, but strong

She doesn't know that the lies that feed her

Will only be the truth

Embedded deep in her forest of lies

Slowly crumbling with her heart

As she contemplates what's right and what's wrong

No one will know her secret

She won't let this kill her.
Something I wrote while listening to "Deteriorate" by Demon Hunter. [link] Really good song.

My friend Nicole thinks this poem is pretty for some reason, haha. Enjoy.
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Alice845 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love this poem. For some reason, reading this kind of helped me a bit with stuff. And your friend is right, this is pretty
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Nessie905 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, well thank you :hug: I'm glad.
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SunshineLove13 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing :heart:
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Nessie905 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:meow: Thank you !
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SunshineLove13 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem :)
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XxGloomyPrincessxX Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist
I like it :heart:
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Nessie905 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :aww:
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