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As blood runs black
Doors are locked
Her heart begins to crack
No more being mocked
She reaches for the pills
Fear of being caught
The silence always kills
Though she knows she was taught
Wringing the heartstrings
Her perception is altered
Bringing the hate with her
Misconception sets in
Sinking below reality
Out of consciousness
Considering morality
Thought pain was bottomless
She's lifeless.
Another of my first rhyming poems. Let me know how I did. I spent some time today on this. Was kind of inspired again.
Stay strong! :)
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sm00chie92 Jun 12, 2013  Student Interface Designer
it's amazing what literature can do, I can see your emotions, and I can feel the way you feel even though I'm not going through such situation. You're doing a good job. I really hope to see an optimistic poem as well though :D i like how you keep saying 'Stay Strong' on your comment below your deviation :D
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Nessie905 Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much! That's good to hear :)
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Write-Then-Think May 11, 2013  Student Writer
This is very well written! great job!
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Nessie905 May 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :)
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Write-Then-Think May 11, 2013  Student Writer
No prob!
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